AdmiralFlapPlak
05-03-2009, 09:06 PM
http://nh4121.aisites.com/wdim170/mywebsite/
it was a web design course so i decided to incorporate my comics into it... tell me what you think.
KeystoneMan
05-03-2009, 10:50 PM
I hope you dont mind, but I took you seriously at "what do you think?' I thought it was creative and fun, and here are my notes about changes! :D
So its going to be turned in for a grade, right? Then I wanted to mention a few things I would change, if it were me. I found some typos that I corrected in bold. I underlined things I would remove. This is from the about me part....
This website is a collection of my drawings and my comics that I have recently created, so none of my older stuff is located on this website. These comics reflectmy own personal opinions and views. of things and The comicsare meant to be somewhat offensive, if they aren't offensive then I haven't done my job right. The doodles and sketches are mostly comprised of characters from my favorite cartoon shows from when I was little and some from even this last summer. I believe that being a kid doesn't have to end at age 18.
I've done , and tried, a lot of different things to try to find my place in this world. I think I may have finally settled on to one. Comics, games, cartoons... are all things that I think I can do with my current set of skills and learning new skillsat this school will definitely let me expand on them.
I like the spiral notebook motif. :) I would play up the doodles. Maybe throw in some flying saucers and and giant monsters. Oh and a game of Tic Tac Toe. I am being serious.
And on the front page, I dont think the "My Stuff" graphic stands out enough. Since it links to the bulk of your material, it should be the natural next step. Id think that link should be larger and moved to the middle. and the other 3 moved to flank it, with "contact: at the bottom. And it would be great to see this done in ink instead of pencil. Maybe even red, black and blue. Blue being my favorite.
AdmiralFlapPlak
05-04-2009, 11:45 AM
thanks for the critique Mr Keystoneman! ya i wrote that at like 2 am the day before it was due... i had no idea we were suppose to put actual mini biography in that spot (i just had lorem ipsum) but ya ill fix that later tonight!
If i were to spend more time on it i would totally make it a lot better... the teacher sidetracked us and made it due the second to last week instead of the last.. so all the work you see is me at 2 - 4 am the night before it was due. thanks again for the help (me and my buddy are gonna put together a comic and flash game site and we were gonna use this as a starting point)
JamesAlexander
05-04-2009, 02:14 PM
Keystone said the thing i was going to say :mad:
Ohh well, looks good though, you might want to increase the colour of the grey looks a little weak but then again it good be my eyes. ;)